How to Write a Job Description That Actually Attracts the Right Candidates
Most job descriptions are written for compliance, not attraction. They list every possible requirement, copy-paste language from the last posting, and then wonder why the applicant pool is thin or full of the wrong people.
The problem is that job descriptions are often written by someone who hasn't thought carefully about what they're actually trying to communicate — and to whom.
Start with the person, not the role.
Before you write a single bullet point, ask yourself: what does the ideal person for this job look like? Not their resume — their *judgment*. What decisions will they own? What problems will they wake up thinking about? What does success look like in 12 months?
Write to that person, not to a generic candidate pool.
Lead with what makes the role interesting.
Most job descriptions bury the interesting stuff — the challenge, the growth opportunity, the actual impact — under a wall of requirements. Flip it. Open with why a great candidate should care about this role. What's the opportunity? What's the problem they'd be solving?
Be specific about the hard stuff.
Don't hide the challenges. If the company is in a turnaround, say it. If the department is understaffed, say it. If the first 90 days will be intense, say it. The right candidate will lean in. The wrong one will self-select out — which saves everyone time.
Cut the requirements list in half.
If your posting requires 10+ years of experience, a specific degree, and five certifications for a mid-level role, you're filtering out strong candidates who don't check every box but could absolutely do the job. Every requirement you add is a person you're excluding. Be deliberate about which ones actually matter.
Write like a human.
"Dynamic self-starter who thrives in fast-paced environments" tells a candidate nothing. Write like you're describing the role to a smart friend. Use plain language. Be direct. Sound like the kind of company someone would actually want to work for.
A well-written job description isn't just a sourcing tool — it's a signal. It tells candidates whether you know what you're looking for, whether you've thought carefully about this hire, and whether your company is one worth joining. Get it right, and the right people will find you.

Nick Burns
Founder, TrustedHire · Minneapolis executive recruiter specializing in Accounting & Finance, HR, and Operations · 15+ years · 500+ placements
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